Power is the last name of horses, is the representation of ability, is like the people who know how to write and do it well; because who got the correct words to express her or himself, is the one who got the power. The power to create, to communicate, to being listen.
That is writing to me, is the way I saddle my horse, caressing his loin, also to keep him clean, it is like the strong connection that I establish whit him, in a few words to be her friend; exercise of the writing is what I do with my horse, it is the writing in his form, in his poetry, in his gallop, in his run, in his legs.
The free will to go anywhere, to write what I want, what I think, what I feel. To have the power and the control, but also is the emotion of feeling that your heart is going to bloom of exiting, sometimes like nervous of drop away or to let some others ride your horse, read your creation and critiqued what you do.
Even though I love to write as much as I love to ride my horse, and maybe the people could think that ride a horse is kind of painful, and there are right, it is, as it is also the exercise of write, is painful in some way when for example, when I recognize that I have a mistake, and I need go back, recheck, correct and rewrite.
my dear rose, I heart the analogy but they are this little things that may shape better what you wrote.
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The power of create, the power of communicate, the power of being listen.
I don't think you need to repeat power on every line and instead of *of-to create, to communicate.
in few words
in a few words
the power the control
the power, the control
the power and control
I love write as much as
I love to write as much as
I recognize that I have a mistake
When I recognize.....
thanks ...I appreciate your corrections
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