More than 30.000 people have marched on the streets of Santiago de Chile protesting against the current Educational Policies that include increasing the cost of public education.
Nowadays, students that look for a better future have to go to voucher schools with very high prices, making them ask for long-term loans wich are not proportional to families economic limiting the access to education.
By: Yolima Bolaños, Mariana Aristizabal and Diana Hernández.
I think your text is very clear and shows in a general way what is happening in Chile. you could write a final sentence that makes readers to think about Chile's situation.
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ReplyDeleteI agree with Bejarano,your text is very clear in terms of vocabulary,spelling, cohesion,coherence and so on.
Personally, I think you are a good writer because you always have nice ideas for writing, moreover, you develop them in a very good way.