Writing in english is like cooking because first I need to know what I am going to prepare and when I write I must know what the text is going to be about.
I see what I already have or know and see what is missing, then I need to buy or search for things for my food or text.
When I have all what is necessary I begin by following some steps and at the end I get what I want, which is a good text or dinner.
Writing in spanish is like going the shopping, because I have to see what suits me and in my writing I have to see what is suitable for my text; of course that I like it.
Writing in french is like having sex with a girl that you don't know, because when I write the goal is to write a good, interesting and brilliant text and in the sex the goal is to please her; and sometimes no matter how much you read about it or if you already have done before, all the texts and the girls are not the same, some I need to try many things and at the end my performance and my text are going to be evaluate.
lol! I enjoyed your text, especially your fears on the last paragraph.
ReplyDeleteAbout the text I have some suggestions that can help the reader to understand it easier.
*...like cooking, because first I need - You are using "first" so it means you are going to propose more points, but in the ext I don't see a "second point". So I think you should delete that word.
*is like going shopping. the article "the" is not necessary.
*...and talking about sex...
*A girl you have ever met before. -last paragraph.
*write a good, an interesting and a brilliant
*so I need to try many things.
Last suggestion... just have fun... anyone is gonna judge u for ur performances or texts... TLK2UL8R