For me writing in English is like when at home men try to fix something being clueless about how the thing works. Once they have provoked a huge mess, they call someone really skillful to fix the problem. When I write I try to do it by myself without anyhelp, but at the end I realize that is always better to look for help.
For me writing in Spanish is like when you are a kid and your parents don't keep their promises because before the writing I have my mind full of ideas and I get pretty excited about but oncein front of the paper I'm not able to express myself
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ReplyDeletei think that in this part you should put a coma. "
"For me writing in English is like when at home, men try to fix something..."
for me is interesting your comparison about what writing is. the ideas are well organized.
and wwriting in French? jejejejejeje.
well ana I think you have a lot of ideas, most of them good ones as you read a lot, so you know many things. it would be nice to read something you write. at the end I know you're gonna make something really good.
ReplyDeleteI like the abstract comparison in the spanish part.