For me writing in Spanish is like a film because the director puts in the piece of art his vision, his ideas, his knowledge... It's a really hard work but at the end he's able to put every single aspect into the film and has an excellent result. The same with writing; everything I feel and see is located in some part of the text and I try to write it being so faithful to my ideas and emotions.
For me writing in English is like going to an unknown land; you have to explore this new place, find the things could lead you to a satisfactory life. It's difficult at the beginning because of many details but you get used. In English you have to explore the language, know about it and manage it in order to have a good text.
For me writing in French is like mathematics, they are hard... So hard!!!, they are complex and make me angry. Writing in French is so hard because of the grammatical aspects, there are so many complexities and actually makes me angry because it'd seem like the more I practice the more I see mistakes... But anyway! This is a process, I have to improve.
Hi. I love the way you write.
ReplyDeleteI'm gonna make some corrections, I hope it's not a problem:
First:
It's a really hard work but at the end he's able to put every single aspect into the film and has an excellent result.==> iN THIS SENTENCE, AT THE END. IT IS MISSING SOMETHING, WHEN U SAY: "AND HAS AN EXECELLENT RESUT": You copuld use at least the personal pronoun "it" or say : as a consequence it has an excellent result, or something similar.
Second: "The same with writing...": I would say : the same happens with wrting.
Third: "everything I feel and see..."= In this sentence you have to use "I" , it doesn't work like in spanish, we say: todo lo que siento y veo, but in english you have to put it.
Fourth: find the things could lead ...
I think there's missing "THAT"
when it is followed by a verb
http://web.ku.edu/~edit/that.html