Recently, thousands of chilean students marching with purpose of obtaining public education system in that country in consonance with the current system that means social inequality for these citizens and their families that need to pay in many cases three times more for the studies of their children to institutions like Icetex here, so, this is the same situation for us, for example, our goverment obtains too many taxes with natural sources like coal mines. It is known that in Colombia there are many coal mines that are exploted by foreing companies that don't pay taxes for it, and obviously it means that educational, health and other systems or institutions don't receive enough to develop their programs and cover our necessities.
It is difficult to follow your text due to the lack of periods. Try to put some in order to separate the ideas or the arguments you want to develop. It might help your text become clearer.
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ReplyDeleteYou talk about something it is also important: health system don't receive the economic resources that Hospitals need.Although goverment feels proud of covering almost all the Colombian population with the SISBEN it continues being so inhuman. The educational issue is similar, goverment has a deformed vision of what is quality and as a result with see overcrowding in public schools.
*I suggest you to change the form of the verb "marching" for the past form "marched" and using punctuation in the first five lines.