Friday, 26 August 2011

Microwritting #2

What probably awaits us: the chilean educational situation.

Lately, a huge mass of students, teachers and parents have come out to streets to protest against the neo-liberal education policies that were set up by the government since 1970. These policies, very similar to what colombian government wants to impose, tranlate to privatisation, cuts in education budgets, etc.

Ana Isabel Ortíz
Maria Cristina Muñoz
Julián Ricardo Sepúlveda.
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3 comments:

  1. DIANA M26 August 2011 at 15:31

    HI!!!
    I think that you wrote a good idea about the subject but you don't mention the country where it is happening.
    only you said that in the title.

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  2. Vanessat26 August 2011 at 15:39

    Your article is good, it is about policies.. I suggest you to explain the consequences in poor people situation.Your writing is o.k ;)

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  3. Stephania G26 August 2011 at 15:43

    I believe this text goes straight to the point about what is happening and how it started.but I kind off wanted a bit more, maybe a conclusion.
    what you might need to check is minimum
    cohesion, grammar.
    ex: to the streets instead of to streets
    and I don't know why but a have a little problem with *translate.- to transfer, to change, etc..

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