Finally, writing in french is like...... to be psychorigid, you gotta be careful with the grammar, accents..... honestly it has too many things that "no me fluye": it doesn't flow!!
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Friday, 19 August 2011
Writing is....Marcela
Finally, writing in french is like...... to be psychorigid, you gotta be careful with the grammar, accents..... honestly it has too many things that "no me fluye": it doesn't flow!!
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I really like this post for it's honesty and how open and creative you were with the whole thing ... on the other hand I think that you might check a bit the cohesion.
ReplyDeleteex: is that most of the people I know
is that most of the people that I know
for hiding my feeling
to hide my feeling
to hide my feelings
language which I
language that I
^ I thought of this one like this because of the kind of text, which may sound too formal